Wednesday 30 January 2013

Individual Edit + Feedback

My Edit



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What was good?
  • There as good continuity, the shots flowed well as the editing was good.
  • Some Enigmas were created. 'Who was the girl with blood on her clothes?'
  • There was a Variety of shots.
  • Effective use of costume to fit Horror genre.

What needs to be improved?
  • There was no music, music could be used effectively to help build up tension.
  • Needs more horror, the clip only made the audience scared or jump in fright a little.
  • There was noise in the background that shouldn't have been there.



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